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Julie…

I like how you say that to be an “absolute individual” we would have to be separated from our society. We seem to connect with each other in some ways even if we do not know everything about each other. And you admit that you have no idea what to write about :P

You are scared when you picture the line “trapped within our own minds”. Are you too afraid to figure out how this is reality for all of us?

Just like you, many others seem to have many big questions about this concept. The thing is that even though we are living our life like this day to day for years, we still have no right answer. Is there a right answer?

I think that you have many thoughts and ideas to share with us, but you are stuck. I think that you should answer the questions that you have written towards the end. It will definitely help you dig deeper and you may even be able to get an answer out of all of this. In your writing you seem rushed, maybe this is the way you write, but you should proofread your work.

After reading this, I am starting to wonder about the questions you asked and build off of them. Why are we spending our time in class thinking about absolute individuality?

It was nice reading your thoughts, I will like to read more soon.

Eric…

I like how you put Banach’s lecture in your own words, so readers understand what you think about it. You like to connect his lecture to yourself as well.

You do not know what is going on in other people’s lives; neither do they know about what is going on in your life. You say that the absolute freedom of an individual “is a person who is different and knows that there experiences are different from others and accepts it as to not be shackled down by the constant need to know what people have gone through in there lives”.

Many people seem to agree with Banach’s idea of us not knowing about each other, even if we are to be standing so close, our secrets are locked up within ourselves and can never be revealed.

Reading your thoughts shows that you only talk about what you think as your own person about the lecture. You should take it a step further and maybe try to think about what other people have to say about this. Is it the same things you have said or is it different? Why do you think so? I would also go back and check on those grammar mistakes.

Reading your ideas helps me make many connections; I am able to think more about my thoughts after reading you post. This seems to connect to our course since we are figuring out why we are here living in this world, and all the concepts surrounding this idea.

It was interesting to read your thoughts, I would like to read more soon.